Wednesday 1 May 2024

Romeo & Juliet - work in progress

So I've started on another new book, and this time it's Romeo and Juliet.

Following my meeting with a publisher a couple of weeks ago, I came away with notes. Since them I have zhooshed up some pages of two existing books, and now begun work on a new one, with that publisher expressly in mind. The zhooshed up pages are:

Midsummer Night's Dream: pages 20 - 24 redrawn and coloured as new pages 20 25

Twelfth Thing: pages 29 - 32 redrawn & coloured as Twelfth Night new pages 29 -32

Now I begin on R&J and here is my work in progress:
Monday 29 & Tuesday 30 April - Prologue and Act One written as my scribble laid-out script.
Weds May 1st - Pages 1 - 8 pencilled, 5 - 8 inked. Feels good to make a start.
Thurs May 2nd - Pages 1 - 15 pencilled and inked (and my agent chasing me!)
Fri May 3rd - Pages 16 - 20 pencils + inks. 
We agree to get stuff ready to present next Weds, so for a Tuesday night deadline.

To be continued





My Books and where to get them:

Richard The Third Amazon - Etsy - Barnes & Noble - Waterstones
Findlay Macbeth - Amazon  - Etsy 
Prince Of Denmark Street - Amazon - Etsy - Kindle
Midsummer Nights Dream Team  - Amazon Etsy 
Shakespeare Omnibus Collection (all 3 books) - Amazon

Tales From The Bible - Amazon -  Etsy - Webtoons
The Book Of Esther - Lulu  - Amazon Webtoons
Joseph, Ruth & Other Stories - Lulu
Captain Clevedon - Amazon
Tales Of Nambygate - Amazon  


 

Thursday 25 April 2024

Deadpool Wolverine and school - what's appropriate?


And today's big question is: what's appropriate for kids? In the photo above you can see, from the top, the trailer for the new Marvel movie Deadpool & Wolverine; then a comic of the same name, which is one of the batch that I'm currently taking into classrooms when I teach my Comic Art Masterclass; and at the bottom right a comic strip entitled Deadpool Finds A Machen (sic) Gun, written and drawn by a Year 4 pupil at a school this week.

If you've not seen the Deadpool & Wolverine movie trailer yet, one thing that is most outstanding about it is its use of strong language. Although they only, it says here, drop the f-bomb six times in the trailer, it seems like more, and it also feels grossly gratuitous. Like a nine year old has been given a free rein to use sweary words for the first time and runs down the hall shouting them at everyone they pass. Or when a foreign exchange student learns them and uses them inappropriately in every sentence. 

It makes you nostalgic for the days when Eddie Murphy would make the headlines for using over a hundred in a movie (I think it was his stand up movie Raw back in 1987 that made the news at the time). But even then none would make it into the trailer. And if Deadpool and Wolverine were to continue the rate of effing and jeffing they manage in the trailer - 6 f-words in 2.5 minutes - then they'd easily beat Eddie Murphy's tame 223. (They would, as if it matters, get 213 f-words into a 90 minute movie at that rate. But since their movie is bound to be nearer two hours, that'd give them 288 f-words. NB, I am fully aware they won't be doing that.)

My question is : should I now be bringing Deadpool & Wolverine comics into a class of 8 year olds? The comic is pretty safe reading. The images are borderline strong, I mean they wouldn't pass the Comics Code Authority rating of my childhood, but there's no x-rated language, no nudity, and although people get shot up and cut up, they all turn out to be androids and there's no blood. (I tell a lie, there's one scene where someone has made a totem pole out of body parts. Oh god, I've been taking this into primary schools!) (And I now spot that, in tiny letters on the front cover by the bar code, it says "Parental Advisory". Oh god!!)

The thing is, the pupil who drew that strip - and he is not alone among the kids I teach - was already more than familiar with Deadpool. And indeed he's a character I'm asked how to draw more than most others, and usually by primary school kids, so under the age of 11.

So, if I am (from now on) banning Wolverine and Deadpool comics from the selection I bring in and show to children, what else should I be editing out? Is it appropriate for me to be regularly drawing Harley Quinn on the flipchart at the start of the class, as in the example below, when she already stars in an age-inappropriate adult cartoon on TV, and is about to be played by Lady Gaga in a very dark and undoubtedly R-rated version in Joker Folie A Deux?

In short, where are the boundaries, and how is anyone supposed to know them? 

Once, long ago, it was pretty easy. Fifty years ago, when I was growing up, stories about superheroes in spandex fighting villains were self-evidently nonsense for children, and were marketed and branded accordingly. All US comics had to carry the Comics Code badge and have no content that was unsuitable for an 8 year old to read, and the British equivalents followed a similar unofficial code. Since the 1980s we've had comics for, so-called, grown-ups; since the 90s we've had the f-word in mainstream comics published by, first, DC, and then Marvel; and this century it's been a relative free for all. 

But my job is, variously, writing and drawing comics for kids, and teaching comics to kids. I want them to understand and enjoy this artform, and I'd like to introduce them to the widest range of content as I can. But I clearly have to draw a line, in places where I previously didn't have to. 

I can show them "safe" Wolverine, and tell them his history and his place in Marvel comics lore. But I then have to say "stop  - out of bounds" when it gets to the most recent movie and the latest comic version, which is on the shelf in our WH Smiths between a Simpsons comic and Commando Picture Library.

The movie then begs the question of how we prevent our kids being exposed to language we don't want them to hear, and a movie environment that normalises it and makes it attractive to use, in the context of the Marvel Cinematic Universe. Kids like to complete the set, they like to watch everything in the collection. So an obsessive 11 year old, who's devoured every Marvel movie from Iron Man to, god help them, the third Ant Man thing, will simply have to watch Wolverine & Deadpool. And, knowing Marvel, they won't be able to follow the plot of the next movie that comes out if they haven't watched it.

It's an f-bombing minefield. Am I alone in my concerns?



My Books and where to get them:

Richard The Third Amazon - Etsy - Barnes & Noble - Waterstones
Findlay Macbeth - Amazon  - Etsy 
Prince Of Denmark Street - Amazon - Etsy - Kindle
Midsummer Nights Dream Team  - Amazon Etsy 
Shakespeare Omnibus Collection (all 3 books) - Amazon

Tales From The Bible - Amazon -  Etsy - Webtoons
The Book Of Esther - Lulu  - Amazon Webtoons
Joseph, Ruth & Other Stories - Lulu
Captain Clevedon - Amazon
Tales Of Nambygate - Amazon  


Wednesday 24 April 2024

Avocado with lots of Peppa, & a makeover - more comics by kids


From Abergavenny Writing Festival to a prep school in Northamptonshire to two schools in Staffordshire, these Comic Art Masterclasses were a delight, though a little dominated by Peppa Pig. They did also involve a lot of Taylor Swift, and a slightly embarrassing post-event makeover.


Christchurch Lichfield was a return booking, and they came up with smashing titles this time. Bobby Dazzler was a surprising term that seems to have returned from the olden days, and there we see our first mentions of Peppa Pig and fatness.


Abergavenny Writing Festival was a fun one-off gig, which included Cath and Oliver from our Society Of Authors group as class members. After this class, Hev and I then had to make our way to Nottingham for the Scottish Falsetto Socks to perform Eurovision at the Theatre Royal that night. I like to keep busy.


Maidwell Hall in Northants is a very posh prep school. I was invited by the head, who'd previously been at Horris Hill, which was the poshest prep school I'd previously taught at. The infectious nature of Peppa Pig made itself clear here. Whenever the kids see a previous comic, ie last week's example from Lichfield, with Peppa Pig on, they seemingly can't think of anything funnier in the world. So, as we're whittlng down their thirty suggestions, the Peppa titles win.


Etchinghill in Rugeley was another fun set of classes, with Year 4s. I got caught out by the titles they came up with. While carefully ensuring they didn't vote for the more scatological titles, and making sure I played down the Peppa Pigs this time, I wasn't really paying enough attention to the title they did choose. Inspired no doubt by the fact that I refer to Bottom as an ass, when I'm showing them my Midsummer Night's Dream Team, they found the "...Fat Ass" title above the most hilarious of the classfull. But the inclusion of the words "drunk, deaf" and "blind" along with disgusting and fat is something I should have really addressed. In the whirl of activity I didn't, and I drew it. Quite rightly, the next day the school got in touch and asked if I could amend it.


Phew, I think I just about got away with it. Probably have to put that school down on the "no return booking next year" list.


The celebrities these seven groups chose to star in my demonstration strip were Taylor Swift (three times), Usain Bolt, Cristiano Ronaldo, Jeff Bezos, and the most original suggestion of the month: Jimmy Hill. No, I don't know how they knew him either.


My Books and where to get them:

Richard The Third Amazon - Etsy - Barnes & Noble - Waterstones
Findlay Macbeth - Amazon  - Etsy 
Prince Of Denmark Street - Amazon - Etsy - Kindle
Midsummer Nights Dream Team  - Amazon Etsy 
Shakespeare Omnibus Collection (all 3 books) - Amazon

Tales From The Bible - Amazon -  Etsy - Webtoons
The Book Of Esther - Lulu  - Amazon Webtoons
Joseph, Ruth & Other Stories - Lulu
Captain Clevedon - Amazon
Tales Of Nambygate - Amazon  



Monday 15 April 2024

April Live Book Sales - Wales, Ireland, events & schools



Selling books hand to hand and face to face continues to be my best way of getting them out there. Last month's tally shows me selling the equivalent of 66 Richard The Thirds at live events, and an actual 96 Richard The Thirds in schools, while my sales on Lulu/Amazon, Etsy, Blurb & D2D combined add up to about 40 books, which really doesn't compare.

April started well with the good librarians of Dublin taking 20 Richard The Thirds between them (the profit from which may just have covered the cost of the extra bag I need to take on the plane to carry them), and my next school ordering 29 copies in advance. Then came my first live event:

Swansea Stars Of Time Comicon, Sat April 14th

Total £393 - All books and caricatures, no art sold.

Richard The Third - 26
Midsummer (new edition) - 6
Prince Of Denmark St (original) - 4
Findlay Macbeth (new edition) - 2
Omnibus - 1
Socks Superheroes - 10 (sold out)
Doctors Who Colouring - 3
Euro Vol 1 - 1
Euro 2, 60s Col, Xmas Col - 1

This total follows on from Bristol with the practice of charging for my caricatures, which I had formerly been giving away free as an attractor to my table. Now I say they're free with a book, or a couple of quid donation (or they don't need to keep them, but no one took that option). Halfway through the day I'd already run out of my 100 pre-printed sheets and had to go out and buy more, so I drew about 150 caricatures in the day. If each of those netted me at least a quid, then that explains a fair bit of the total. It also explains the complete sellout of Socks Superheroes comics. At £3 that's the cheapest thing on the table, so they'll obviously plump for that if they really only want the caricature. So I need to print me off some more pocket money comics.

The next option up pricewise would be my three classic Shakespeares at £5.99, but as you can see the overwhelming choice was Richard The Thirds at £6.99, which tells you the demographic of the crowd. Hundreds of parents with kids, for whom Richard is the first choice by far. Some of them have alreay made a beeline for it because they've spotted the "Dogman" lookalike logo, which is starting to get me worried that I've done too good a job in apeing that house style. I mean, it's supposed to appeal to Dogman fans, but I don't want anyone thinking I'm passing myself off as the real thing. 

The new editions of Findlay and MNDT are the Lulu editions without the play at the back which, having sold out of my original 500 print run of both, is all I have left to sell. Meanwhile Richard is down to its last 90 copies, so I'd better get ordering that new print run, hadn't I?

This is my biggest one day total, excluding artwork, sales yet. Other events have taken two days to not raise that much. eg (book sales only, no art):

NICE Beds Sept Sat & Sun = £353
LFCC Nov Sat & Sun = £297
LFCC July Sat & Sun = £294
Bristol March Sat only = £279
Lakes Sept Sat & Sun = £266 
Exeter March Sat & Sun = £187
Torquay Feb Sat only = £213

April Sales In Schools

Apr 8 - 12 Ireland - 20 Richards sold @ €7 (yet to see what this becomes after deductions)
Apr 18 - Christchurch Lichfield - 26 Richards @ £6 = £156
April 20 - Abergavenny - 3 Richards, 3 MNDT, 1 Tales From Bible = £46
Apr 22 - Maidwell Hall, Northants - 9 Richards @ £6 = £54
Apr 23 - Etchinghill - 23 Richards @ £6 = £138





My Books and where to get them:

Richard The Third Amazon - Etsy - Barnes & Noble - Waterstones
Findlay Macbeth - Amazon  - Etsy 
Prince Of Denmark Street - Amazon - Etsy - Kindle
Midsummer Nights Dream Team  - Amazon Etsy 
Shakespeare Omnibus Collection (all 3 books) - Amazon

Tales From The Bible - Amazon -  Etsy - Webtoons
The Book Of Esther - Lulu  - Amazon Webtoons
Joseph, Ruth & Other Stories - Lulu
Captain Clevedon - Amazon
Tales Of Nambygate - Amazon  


Sunday 14 April 2024

Hotel reviews - Ireland

 


I ask you, what kind of mental contraption is this shower, from Mountain Widok guest house in Killorglin, County Kerry? While we're at it, I never found out what a Widok was. I shall assume a typo. 

Mountain Widok, Killorglin



Scored 8.0
A lovely family home, with a warm welcome, a smashing quiet location, and a great view on a good day.
No real complaints. That shower was a bit mental - first of all it squirted cold water at me horizontally, then from the seat upwards, and try as I might I could not work out how to adjust the temperature. Then all of a sudden it gave me hot water from above, and all was sorted. There was no milk for the tea and coffee (though I could have asked, I just didn't bother) and the choice of TV channels was a bit limited (unless you love whatever's on RTE in which case you were sorted).

Dublin Skylon

A lovely hotel, very conveniently located for my work (in Finglas) and with parking (that costs an extra tenner but is worth it). Also the TV had a good range of channels, including BBC, which suited me. A tight-fisted traveller like myself has a good choice of takeaways and a Lidl right outside.

No complaints. Though, watching my budget, I didn't stump up for breakfast, which seemed a bit pricey for my meagre needs.

Plaza Hotel, Tallaght

Perfect hotel in perfect location for work, and with free parking in the basement car park, and an excellent breakfast. Plus the TV was Smart, and had Youtube working on it (Netflix too, but I didn't risk using my password just in case), so I was well catered for.

Ach, what's not to like about Tallaght? You don't have to answer that. And luckily you don't have to venture out into Tallaght if you don't want to.

Travelodge, Swords

Convenient for someone who's flying early, with a garage for refuelling and a Lidl just across the way. And the car park is free, which is an absolute delight.

No complaints.

Easyhotel

Surprisingly good. When I first saw the room I thought it was a bit small and stark, but in fact it had everything I needed and is in a convenient location for shops, eateries and parking.

The TV looked like it had more channels than it ended up having (the BBC channels weren't working, but maybe that was temporary).

Phoenix Hotel

A nice old place, conveniently situated for work.
I know it's unfair, but the previous night I'd stayed at another hotel, equally convenient for work, and I'd have been better off there because there was better parking close by and more choice on the telly. This place only had RTE and Irish channels, no more exotic choices, and defo no BBC, ITV, Channel 4 or any such. I guess the fact that it was Taskmaster and Apprentice night was on my mind. Parking was on street and metered, with a frustrating meter which wouldn't let you pay in advance for the following morning, so I had to get up and stuff a meter at 7am.


My Books and where to get them:

Richard The Third Amazon - Etsy - Barnes & Noble - Waterstones
Findlay Macbeth - Amazon  - Etsy 
Prince Of Denmark Street - Amazon - Etsy - Kindle
Midsummer Nights Dream Team  - Amazon Etsy 
Shakespeare Omnibus Collection (all 3 books) - Amazon

Tales From The Bible - Amazon -  Etsy - Webtoons
The Book Of Esther - Lulu  - Amazon Webtoons
Joseph, Ruth & Other Stories - Lulu
Captain Clevedon - Amazon
Tales Of Nambygate - Amazon  



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