Thursday, 29 May 2014

Perfect Pansy & Bare Girrls - this week's Beano

This week's Beano features my favourite of the Pansy Potter strips I've written and drawn. Above you can see the original rough script for the first two panels. You'll need to buy The Beano to see the finished art and the punchline, of which I hope I am not too inordinately proud. My name is once more hidden in plain sight. (My Mum confessed that she couldn't spot my hidden signature the other week on the Notebook strip. My hints were possibly a little too subtle. Clue: it rhymes with Porse Pode.)

This week's Dennis story features the second appearance in the past month of Bear Grylls, who's clearly a reader's favourite. This would explain why my own Bear Grylls parody - the Little Plum episode Bare Girrls - didn't see the light of day. So here, for your delight and delectation, is that undrawn script in its entirety. Enjoy.


LITTLE PLUM – BARE GIRRLS          Kev F Sutherland 1pp

1               PLUM is walking through driving snow, pulling a skimpy bearskin around him to keep warm. He is about to trip over a lump in the snow in front of him

PLUM              WE GET THE WORST SNOW HERE ON THE PRARIE! GOT TO GET HOME BEFORE I FREEZE!

2               PLUM goes flying as he trips over a lump in the snow. A pair of eyes emerge from the lump and it speaks

PLUM              WOAH- OOPS!

LUMP              HERE, WATCH WHERE YOU’RE GOING!

3               Lying in the snow PLUM is face to face with the man under the lump. He is BARE GIRRLS (obviously based on Bear Grylls) an explorer type with ropes round his shoulder, an Indiana Jones hat, and a backpack pull of pickaxes, davy lamp and the like (we’ll see these in later picture, not necessarily this one).

PLUM              A TALKING ROCK? OH GOODY, I’VE GOT HYPOTHERMIA!

BARE               DO YOU MIND, I WAS SHELTERING FROM THE STORM IN MY IMPROVISED SNOW HOLE.

4               BARE springs from the hole and strikes a dramatic pose, PLUM huddles against the snow

BARE               FOR I AM BARE GIRRLS - ADVENTURIST & SURVIVALISER! I CAN SURVIVE ANYWHERE!

PLUM              OK, MAN-FROM-CITY-WITH-NUTTY-NAME, COME TO OUR NICE WARM CAMP.

5               BARE defiantly builds an igloo on the spot

BARE               I NEED NO WEEDY TENTS AND FIRES! LOOK HOW I BUILD AN IGLOO  WITH MY BARE HANDS! NATURE DOES NOT SCARE ME!

6               PLUM looks at him quizzically, BARE is big and boastful

PLUM              OH YEAH? WE’VE GOT SOME WELL FIERCE WILDLIFE

BARE               WOULDN’T BOTHER ME

PLUM 2          AND TERRIFYING TERRAIN

BARE 2           I LAUGH AT TERRIFYING TERRAIN

PLUM 3          MY  MUM’S COOKING?

BARE 3           BRING IT ON!

7               In a mega challenge, BARE is dangling from a rocky peak, with snakes round his legs, spider running up him, vultures circling, and he is taking a bite out of an unappetizing looking pie. PLUM and the WARRIORS look on impressed and applaud.

BARE               SEE HOW THE MIGHTY BARE GIRRLS CONQUERS YOUR DAUNTING MOUNTAINS AND YOUR MOST FEROCIOUS BEASTIES

BARE 2           - AND MANAGES TO SWALLOW, AND KEEP DOWN, ONE OF PLUM’S MUM’S BUFFALO PIES!

FX                    CLAP CLAP CLAP

8               Having come down from the mountain, BARE brushes off the last insects.

BARE               THAT’S RIGHT, I’M THAT BRILLIANT. SO, WHERE ARE THE CAMERAS?

PLUM              CAMERAS? WE DON’T HAVE CAMERAS!

9               BARE shrieks in horror

BARE               WHAT? NO CAMERAS? NO TV SHOW? NOT EVEN ANY INTERNET? YOU MEAN THE WORLD’S NOT WATCHING ME BEING ALL BRAVE AND SURVIVALLY?

PLUM              ‘FRAID NOT

10           BARE runs off crying. PLUM looks to the camera and whirls his finger around his temple, the universal ‘nutter’ signal

BARE               THEN WHAT’S THE POINT??? BOO HOO ! MUMMY!!

PLUM              THESE CITY FOLK ARE CRAZY!

END




As well as writing Bananaman and drawing Pansy Potter in The Beano, Kev F Sutherland has worked for everyone from Marvel to Doctor Who & most points inbetween, and runs Comic Art Masterclasses in schools, libraries and art centres - email for details, and follow him on Facebook and Twitter. He's been writing and drawing comics for 25 years, he must know something.

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